He Doesn't
13 December, 2001
Author: Your Melody
He doesn't seem to notice
He doesn't seem to care
He doesn't even complimetn on the way you fixed your hair
He doesnt' get hat look in his eye
Or take the time to say good-bye
He doesn't say the things he used to
Like how much he loved or missed you
He deosn't seem happy, but just mad
He doesn't see that this makes you sad
He doesn't laugh at your attempts to be funny
He stopped calling you things like sweetie or honey
Has he found someone else
Have you been replaced
Has he found another pretty face
Mabye he found her behind another door
I guess this means he doens't love you anymor
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Pamela (66.38.146.29) -- Saturday, December 21 2002, 07:04 pm It's the little things that make a HUGE difference - I would have to say that this poem captured that flawlessly. I've had these exact feelings before.....stirs up a lot of old emotions. |
| LeAnn (67.40.38.195) -- Wednesday, February 19 2003, 02:57 am All the feelings that I have! I am in awe.! |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.136) -- Wednesday, February 19 2003, 10:10 am awesome poem......know what it's like |
| shery (152.163.253.65) -- Wednesday, July 16 2003, 05:12 am i love the way u express yourself a few months ago i used 2 feel like that this is a berautiful poem |
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