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You
Author: XoForeverXo

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You are my permanent intoxication
Demolishing me whole
A desire's inflation
Stealing my soul
No cure, no medication
No free will, no self-control
No longer capable of distinguishing
what's right or what's wrong
What's real or what's not
My dream, my nightmare.

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Meridian Z. (152.163.252.35) -- Monday, February 23 2004, 05:23 pm

XoForeverXo (GOOD ONE)

Just wanted to say, I like the first line on down to the last. I hope I'll read more from you! Nice job!!!!
heaven (10.113.44.79) -- Monday, March 15 2004, 05:26 pm

so umm well real...

i realy like this poem ...keep up the good work..-heaven
 
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