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Falling
Author: Zak

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Falling,
Falling.
Never to stop desending.
I scream in this lonelyness.
I CAN'T STOP!
HELP!
My cry gets quieter and quieter.
It forms into energy,
traveling down to my fist.
Then I find it in someones face or a wall.
This will never end..

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (65.57.57.79) -- Sunday, March 23 2003, 07:27 pm

Zak, I have also, left my mark, and understand these words.

Zak,
To much day to day truth in this one, its is complete. I have no words that can fit your rage except to say, I too have left my mark upon some walls, but always try to avoid the face. Sometimes, it just explodes and I know, it needs some place to go.

Your anger/frustration is acknowledged, and felt!

MartinV
 
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