Climbing Just To Fall 2
16 April, 2004
Author: LinzAy
And now these elevator doors have closed
With me inside
Wise choice I suppose
Although I still ended up with pain to hide
It seems forever has passed
And I still haven't reached the lobby floor
Giving me time to rid of the tears
That I don't need anymore
I never had the right to expect anything I suppose
I had words though
And like a fool I believed them
But now I've let them go
The metal doors slowly slide open
And I walk away looking back at you
But you don't seem to care, as always
So, frustrated, I stand there and scream goodbye at you
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Meridian (64.12.116.140) -- Saturday, April 17 2004, 04:25 pm "Climbing Just to Fall"........I love it! Especially the 1st paragraph and the last. You find yourself reaching the climax of love, or the peak of love, and then you suddenly fall backwards from where you started from. Good poem on love lost or love ending!! Meridian |
| LinzAy (65.33.88.97) -- Sunday, April 18 2004, 12:54 am Thankyou! And yeah....uh...forgot..so thanks again! lol |
| everett (209.240.207.43) -- Friday, April 23 2004, 06:21 am in your words i can feel your frustration... you definatly paint a picture with each of your poems. i always enjoy your writing and your style :) |
| LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Friday, April 23 2004, 03:14 pm Definitely frustrated! Thanks Ev :) |
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