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Sweet Release
12 June, 2002
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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Ah! Sweet Release
Life's greatest reward
Let go of all stress
Of the day that was born

Sparks Fly
With thunder and lighting inside
Holding back vocals
Feeling warm and inspired

Ah ! sweet sensation
Relaxing, well spent
Animated with life
Spine tingling event

All Wrongs now forgotten
All focus on self
Ah! sweet release
Of enjoying oneself

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Comments on this poem/writing:

junelle (209.239.5.235) -- Thursday, May 22 2003, 02:54 am

favor?? sweet release and insanity's clown

these two poems were really great, you are very talented. I have a favor, in english class we need to find a poem that has similarities with a work we've read in class. your poem "sweet release" reminded me of a play we read called "shirley valentine", and your "insanity's clown" reminded me of a play we read called "death of a saleman". I was wondering that if I dont find anything else, and really prefer yours, may i use it for my assignment? please write back asap. thanks dreamer:)
Bryan (66.72.73.71) -- Saturday, April 17 2004, 09:20 pm

SMASHING POEM!!

I thought it was a great poem. Reminds me of some of the nights i have spent in my lifetime!
Martin Vann (4.244.171.118) -- Thursday, April 22 2004, 03:22 pm

The beauty Of Love Within, You Shared With Us

Dreamer,

There is that place, within ourselves, we say its shared, but in truth, one must have a private place, not only for self, but for our heart, which we do share with love.

There are those gifts, love and heart will give to our private thoughts, few have the courage, to share, such private thoughts.

A gift of love, shared within one's self is difficult to explain, yet, with your words, you shared with us, the privacy of your heart and self.

Very tender expression, beautiful for all to read, who know their own heart well enough to share it's private thoughts.

MartinV
Terrie* (65.150.167.199) -- Friday, April 23 2004, 04:38 pm

Dreamer,

such magical romantic intense feelings we've all experienced many times ,captured beautifully in this silhouette painting of your words , thank you for sharing and allowing one to reminise and release the beauty of inner feelings of ones heart 'n soul..............
 
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