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Test Of Time
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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Our Relationship has lasted oh so long,
Together we exsist to help one another through,
You were put there in my way,
I came and could not pass,
To see such a wonder before me took my breath away,
I remember how you gazed upon my body,
You were so caring not to touch,
So strong to let me pass in a way, I loved it so,
Without touching me once,
Yet I felt your every move,
I felt such a need to come through,
Many times we've passed each other by,
Times I long for you to ask,
Stop wait awhile let's talk just once,
I pass on by,
You stand with total pride,
You'r strength I admire,
For many others are no more,
I saw them come,
I passed them by,
I watched them crumble,
But you have lasted the test of time,
So now I'll stay next to you for all time.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Wednesday, April 21 2004, 03:33 pm

How Sweet It Is!

Good Morning Clive! It's almost Good Afternoon!
I love the true meaning behind this heart touching poem "Test Of Time"! You've met someone who stands as firm as a wall! In comparison to line 21, when you say, "I watched them crumble"! But this person never falls, but only lasts the test of time! Absolutely beautiful!

Astounding Poem!

Meridian
Tammy (66.38.6.216) -- Wednesday, April 21 2004, 04:22 pm

Clive

"Test of Time" this is truely a heart touching poem
Terrie* (65.150.167.199) -- Friday, April 23 2004, 04:50 pm

Clive,

De-Ja-vu.....very heart warming Terrie*
 
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