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Betrayal Of Trust
8 June, 2000
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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A friendship good as gone
Betrayed by a lie
When something tears it
Say good-bye

Muddled thoughts caused by self inflicted pain
Responses not the norm
Not the process of the sane
I can no longer let it pass

Excuses no longer hold the water
They seemed to long ago
Made allowances
Now pale in the light

Who did you think you were
Crossing boundaries designed in friendship
Betrayal of trust is sacred
My heart now feels the lack

It's sad you may never realize
How the pain you caused will hurt
The lasting effect you have put upon
My trust thrown to the dirt

Our friendship, it is in the past
Nothing to salvage now
Without a trust, it can never be
Drug induced behavior, fine ...now your free

------- Author's Notes -------

Friendships can let you down. Once the trust is gone there is nothing left to salvage. And your left with only the choice to let go.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Rose (65.29.169.195) -- Thursday, June 19 2003, 02:52 pm

i know how this feels

i can relate to this poem majorily......i just recently lost a friendship that mattered the world to me...i caused him pain 'cuz of my lies....it hurts to know we'll never be friends again...but i have other close ones...and from my failed friendship, i learned to be honest w/my other friends that mean the world to me....i learned to let go and im ok....ill be ok.
Babygurl (66.144.13.254) -- Thursday, December 18 2003, 05:58 am

I really like this poem

i really like this poem it speakes the truth makes you feel as if your the one in the predictament. it an inspiring poem
becky (24.24.87.251) -- Sunday, January 11 2004, 10:35 am

may i use your poem?

i really enjoyed this poem. i am doing a project for my english class and would like to use this.
Cammy (64.107.11.12) -- Thursday, July 15 2004, 08:21 pm

cammy

can i use your poem? <snip>
Dreamer (4.227.47.68) -- Friday, July 16 2004, 09:16 am

mhmm

yes, with proper credit to my being the author.
brandy (66.157.35.198) -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 02:51 am

hey!

this poem is very good
Shermira (141.150.231.210) -- Friday, February 8 2008, 04:45 pm

this is the shit!!

it's so true, everything in your poem is apart of how real friendships work and fall apart, great insight to how friends feel about being betrayed by a friend! Kudos to u!!
 
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