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Cat Hair Everywhere
4 November, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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On the sidewalk
on the stairs
On the front porch
on the swinging chair
Cat hair.... cat hair everywhere!

On the door knob
on the door
Walking inside
Oh no, I see more
Cat hair....cat hair everywhere!

On the carpet
down the hall
on the picture frames
hanging on the wall
Cat hair....cat hair everywhere!

In the kitchen
on the tiles
Up on the counter
going on for miles
Cat hair....cat hair everywhere!

On the table
in the air
I got a feeling
your cupboard's not bare
Cat hair....cat hair everywhere!

On the butter
on the cheese
It gets in my nose
And I'm gonna sneeze
Cat hair....cat hair everywhere!

On the place mats
and look there
Tell me what's that
fuzz on the silverware?
Cat hair....cat hair everywhere!

Come for lunch?
No, I don't think so
Thanks so much
for asking though
Oh, by the way,
are you aware?
You got.... cat hair everywhere!

On your collar
on your shoes
Now I do suspect
your underwear, too
Cat hair....cat hair everywhere!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

~Leah~ (66.222.217.200) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 04:08 am

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you would make a really great childrens book author!
Ben (67.122.250.227) -- Friday, November 7 2003, 01:44 am

~Leah~, thank you for......

~Leah~, thank you for you comment on "Cat Hair Everywhere! I am pleased to know that you think I would be good at children's books. I have written some songs with children in mind! Thanks again! ***Ben
Angel Laney (198.81.26.72) -- Wednesday, November 12 2003, 03:46 am

Hi Dad

I love this poem! I have dog hair everywhere! Want to come over. A ha ha ahhhahaha!!!!!!!
Dad (67.122.249.168) -- Wednesday, November 12 2003, 08:04 am

Poetic Angel, Thank you for...

My Poetic Angel, thank you for your comment, especially your laugh! It looks almost maniacal! I really am glad you love this one and appreciate your words soooo much! And you know I love your dog, Emmy Lou Love, and do want to come over....right after you vacuum! Ha! Ha! Haaa Thanks again! ***Dad
hay ben you have a lot (67.126.234.3) -- Saturday, November 29 2003, 11:47 pm

no title

two read now and i will try one day two see them all i wish i new how to right like you.bye
Ben (67.122.250.114) -- Sunday, November 30 2003, 04:35 am

Thank you, Janis, for your.....

Thank you, Janis for your kind words, and for taking the time to read my writings and comment on them! I really am happy to know you think I write well and appreciate it very much! Love you, Sis! ***Brother Ben
Colin (69.157.21.2) -- Monday, April 20 2009, 03:14 am

I know exactly what you mean BEN!

I know exactly what you mean BEN!
I think I know where Dr. Suess got his writing mojo from - and it was from you! Sometimes the best way to tell a complex story is to tell it simple!
shiloh (74.65.121.49) -- Monday, April 20 2009, 04:42 am

cat hair...

i, too, am owned by cats... three of them... and if someone is upset by the bit of cat hair they may find here or there or (gasp!) on the furniture... i simply remind them that the cats were here before they were, and anyway, that's why it's call FURniture!
barb (67.58.197.169) -- Monday, April 20 2009, 10:37 pm

yeah I have a cat

And yes there is cat hair,but my neighbor has a dog and she has dog hair all over.We put up with their fur and they put up with smokers.Shiloh comment is right. Good writing about pet peeves lol
 
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