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Torn
9 May, 2003
Author: AJ

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Free my heart,
Save my soul
I beg you all
To make me whole.
Through the dark,
Hear my hark,
Come to me,
I ask you all, Rescue me.
I prayed another break would fade,
But im far to broken,
Beaten through age.
If you read my life, each and every page,
Youd understand my hearts short guage.
I am not one hard to please,
A smile can come through simplest ease,
Promise me you shall not kill,
Ravage my soul for some worthless thrill.
Look into my eyes i ask,
Not to mind or soul, but past
Look to thing you often ignore,
Look to things that scream for more,
Not more hapiness,
But beg for rage,
As I wear down through the days,
The grow stronger, the pain stays longer,
Longer then i can ever ignore,
I must ask of love, but what is it for!?
That i may love to hurt again?
Or i may hurt to love again,
Why must love be made a sin!
And the bypasser wear that grin,
I suppose it was all truly a dream,
Perhaps a prophecy, as it would seem,
That my soul, shall never gleam.
And so i wander,
Growing worse by day
To some day find
A place to lay,
Not by another
Not for a lover,
That my mind may go asunder,
For all the love in this damn world
Could never make me whole,
And thats just something..
I thought u should know.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Maria (207.0.105.235) -- Sunday, May 11 2003, 05:10 am

Huh?

I like this poem... i liked it since you sent it to me. Keep writing. I love you ~LoVeR
Hana (62.64.208.78) -- Sunday, May 11 2003, 01:19 pm

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I loved this poem, it seemed to understand me,it expressed everything I was thinking,amazing,keep it up. xxx
LinzAy (205.188.209.9) -- Monday, May 12 2003, 11:40 pm

''''''

In a way confusing but in an even bigger way very undertandable....but maybe it's just cuz i'm weird?....like the poem.....good writing :)
LinzAy (205.188.209.9) -- Monday, May 12 2003, 11:43 pm

woops ^

Understandable.....
Aj (66.120.160.154) -- Sunday, June 1 2003, 04:32 am

Free wrote

I wrote it in an IM to someone...tried to express my current mood..its ok considering i didnt stop i suppose, thanks for the comments too! , ~Aj.
 
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