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Heartbreaker
Author: Gemma_13

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Why did you have to break my heart
Tell me lies and think i don't know the truth
I wanted us be together not to be apart

My heart is what i gave to you
But you took my love forgranted
I really liked you and i thought you liked me too

We could of been good together you and me
If only could see what you've done to me now
My heart is broken so alone forever i want to be

look what you've done to me HEARTBREAKER

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.252.98) -- Thursday, April 22 2004, 06:26 pm

The Gem

Excellent poem on Heartbreaker, "The Gem"! It's never a good experience to be taken advangtage of, or for granted....Feels like your heart is about to explode doesn't it? I love your elaboration "The Gem"! Great poetic skills!!

Meridian
Sara (216.39.188.210) -- Thursday, April 22 2004, 11:51 pm

great 1

me again! a terrific poem u wrote there The Gem. short but great.
Gemma_13 (86.1.148.240) -- Sunday, October 30 2005, 07:56 pm

thank you

thanks 4 ur comments much appreciated
dana (67.82.34.141) -- Wednesday, March 15 2006, 02:22 am

it's so touching

it makes me wanna cry
cus this sumbody did this to me made me wanna cry forever and feel invisble
Gemma_13 (81.155.79.238) -- Tuesday, May 9 2006, 08:06 pm

Dana

hi thank you for your comment and he did this to me so many times i've lost count but now i'm moving on with the help of friends and fmily and he is now the hurt 1 because he has realised what he is missing..the best advice i was ever given was "Keep your head up" and it works. thanks again for your comment and i hope you enjoy my other pieces of work.
Lauren (68.33.86.105) -- Friday, November 23 2007, 02:00 am

it's perfect

this poem is very touching and it fits my situation and i was wondering if i could borrow it??
Gemma_13 (82.16.240.155) -- Friday, January 25 2008, 11:29 pm

Lauren

Yes sure you can use it ...

thanks for the comments
 
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