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Squeezed
13 April, 2003
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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squeezing
the pressure slowly pushes
from all sides
part of me wants to explode
but I continue
waiting for just the right straw
to be pulled
releasing all that is built up
till I am no more
no resemblence of who I am
where have I gone
where is the time I need so
to regenerate, rest
I need some rest
but I can't sleep, no time
I need peace
there is none to be found
squeezing
till the last straw is pulled
and I just explode
into nothing
into little pieces of nothing
then I'll find rest

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (152.163.189.171) -- Sunday, April 13 2003, 11:44 am

''''''

Good writing Becky!
Jeremi (209.107.96.181) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 02:42 am

Poem Squeezed

I think that this poem has so much meaning to it, so often I feel that exact way!
luc (68.74.74.254) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 11:25 am

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good writing dreamer, really good. it kept me attentive through it all.. and i love a some of those lines to use as quotes ..=^.^= great poem..
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 03:10 pm

Rest!

I know just how you feel Dreamer, when tension winds you up like a spring and you cannot find peace...until the explosion comes releasing all those pent-up emotions ...and finally you are at peace and find rest.

A well expressed poem. Hang in there it will end!
barb (66.46.230.179) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 04:09 pm

you need a rest

dreamer very good writing I felt your stress. wish there was something we could do to help.I feel overwhelmed sometimes. but everything eventually gets better. Have a good cry. that helps me. take care and slow down becky.
Roy (152.163.189.171) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 03:27 pm

Gee know what that is like

Poetry words well put dreamer to understand
Many times I just shake my head to remember who I am what direction I was going in
Roy (152.163.189.71) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 02:29 am

I understand

I go with rest and tommarrow will love and meet you refreshed
Vanessa (165.139.123.17) -- Thursday, April 30 2009, 04:56 pm

i understand

I LOVE IT -N- U DI A GREAT GOB..!!!!!!!..
 
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