13 April, 2003
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)
the pressure slowly pushes
from all sides
part of me wants to explode
but I continue
waiting for just the right straw
to be pulled
releasing all that is built up
till I am no more
no resemblence of who I am
where have I gone
where is the time I need so
to regenerate, rest
I need some rest
but I can't sleep, no time
I need peace
there is none to be found
till the last straw is pulled
and I just explode
into little pieces of nothing
then I'll find rest
Comments on this poem/writing:
|LinzAy (126.96.36.199) -- Sunday, April 13 2003, 11:44 am|
Good writing Becky!
|Jeremi (188.8.131.52) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 02:42 am|
I think that this poem has so much meaning to it, so often I feel that exact way!
|luc (184.108.40.206) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 11:25 am|
good writing dreamer, really good. it kept me attentive through it all.. and i love a some of those lines to use as quotes ..=^.^= great poem..
|Capricorn (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 03:10 pm|
I know just how you feel Dreamer, when tension winds you up like a spring and you cannot find peace...until the explosion comes releasing all those pent-up emotions ...and finally you are at peace and find rest.
A well expressed poem. Hang in there it will end!
|barb (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 04:09 pm|
dreamer very good writing I felt your stress. wish there was something we could do to help.I feel overwhelmed sometimes. but everything eventually gets better. Have a good cry. that helps me. take care and slow down becky.
|Roy (22.214.171.124) -- Wednesday, April 16 2003, 03:27 pm|
Poetry words well put dreamer to understand
Many times I just shake my head to remember who I am what direction I was going in
|Roy (126.96.36.199) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 02:29 am|
I go with rest and tommarrow will love and meet you refreshed
|Vanessa (188.8.131.52) -- Thursday, April 30 2009, 04:56 pm|
I LOVE IT -N- U DI A GREAT GOB..!!!!!!!..
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