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Tonight
13 February, 2003
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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Tonight my love flies away from me
Over the great seas to a world of the unknown
Tonight our life changes
As it has never changed before.

Tonight my love's voice said goodbye
This time goodbye is for a time unknown
Tonight my strength fails
My tears form rivers upon my cheek

Tonight my love moves far away
When he will return is still unknown
Tonight his life takes a dangerous turn
Loneliness begins to fill my heart

Tonight my love sheds a tear of his own
Going on a distant journey unknown
Tonight he puts aside a familiar world
And becomes the warrior he has always dreamed to be

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Sunday, February 16 2003, 06:12 pm


Your words have touched my heart. I can only in part know how you feel.Bless you both!
Martin Vann (65.56.170.228) -- Tuesday, February 18 2003, 05:14 pm

Tonight is a dark one for us all.

"Tonight my love shares a tear of his own." There, right there! That one line, tells us all, about the love you "both share." How lonely you must be, though of little help, we say, many of us have been there to, and we understand.

MartinV
LinzAy (64.12.96.230) -- Wednesday, February 19 2003, 09:24 am

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Great Poem Becky!!
 
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