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Who Am I
13 October, 2002
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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Lost in the what I should be
Forgotten is who I am
Absorbed by emotional vampires
Gone is the very soul

Didn't I use to be somebody
Before I was mommy and wife
Wasn't I a rebel
Wasn't I alive

Who is this person I see now
Gazing at me in the mirror
Am I the person I was destined to be
Or somebody else's lie

Maybe Someday I will remember
And find the life-force that was me
Until then I guess I'll play puppet
Being whoever it is I can still be

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Smiley (64.12.96.135) -- Monday, October 14 2002, 12:21 pm

something lost

I feel that something lost in my name of my inner reflection and try to backtrack in my mind
deidra (66.19.186.135) -- Wednesday, October 16 2002, 05:42 pm


may i use your poem
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Wednesday, October 30 2002, 02:10 pm

That's me!!

Your words sure struck a chord on how I often feel Thanks!
LATECIA TAYLOR (205.204.242.21) -- Monday, March 17 2003, 07:25 pm

WHO AM I

I REALLY LIKE THE POEM
Ash (24.97.207.68) -- Thursday, May 29 2003, 10:17 pm

Wow

I'm only 16 years old but i often get scared that if and when i get married that i will end up this way. Your poem put my very thoughts into words.
Jaici (24.94.247.86) -- Monday, July 14 2003, 04:56 am

good poem

I really like it
alva (10.3.100.211) -- Tuesday, April 20 2004, 06:54 am

nice

can i use ur poem to be in my journal...i'll put ur name against it and will NOT call it my own
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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