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I Long For You
13 April, 2002
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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I long for you, my love
To share this moment with you
Walking hand in hand
Upon the deck of this dream ship

To kiss your lips and taste you
Here in the darkest void of the night
Yet I can not
For you are far from me now

I am alone here in this dream
Sailing across the great waters
But you are not truely far
Not far enough that I can't dream you here

To share this place... this moment
With you my love, feeling you near
I open my eyes to the dizzying darkness
of the waves breaking beneath me

Afraid that I may lean too far
Overwhelmed by my thoughts and dreams
I close my eyes once again, longing..
And I dream you near to me

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Sax (207.166.205.57) -- Thursday, August 29 2002, 02:02 am

Excellent

Besides the fact that if it were so that I'd(or whoever's the "dreamer") be in control of everything and everyone, I'd really like some of my thoughts and fantasy's to be real... Especially right now, again this is another one of your poems that seems to reflect how I feel.... heh.... -_-
zoorash (202.174.129.11) -- Tuesday, September 10 2002, 03:31 pm

admire

well this poem really the best becoz it has realy a deep meaning of missing infact it is a bright but silent expression which struck the heart directy by warm and excelent touch
mental (66.153.163.120) -- Friday, September 13 2002, 02:29 am

the girl in my poems

oh dreamer it's how i feel with that girl that i write about in my poems yes just another horizon that explains that, thanks

your friend MENTAL
anonymous (198.26.122.12) -- Saturday, October 26 2002, 02:53 pm


this pooem fits how every miltary person feels when their love ones are left behind. Excellent touch,with a warm expession, yet to know we're not alone when we're all alone.
Stacey (68.82.127.64) -- Saturday, October 26 2002, 07:03 pm

Such Sweet Words

Becky,
Your words are Dreamy!!
I really like this poem. Excellente :)
lilly (203.175.99.217) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 09:49 am

no title

nice poem:)
Roy (205.188.208.168) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 10:48 am

Yea!

I loved this one and out there on the horizon your man is dreaming that very same thing for you and I know how hard it was to be separated from my wife on that horizon/I hope you sent that one to him/it's gets lonely out there
Clive (63.184.0.139, 2) -- Monday, November 3 2003, 02:37 pm

Breathtaking

Another classic, in so near yet so far,
Thank you for putting this on paper/word
Terrie* (65.148.212.201) -- Wednesday, November 5 2003, 02:13 am

charming.....

he is not far.... he is ...at your side...you are not alone .....he rest calmly upon your heart...he is but an arms length away...feel his touch? just close your eyes once again and meet him in your dream....i loved this....it is sooo sweet!
 
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