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Ship Of Dreams
2 February, 2002
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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I stand here on deck in the moonlight
Gazing out at the sapphire and diamond sea
Wondering what you are doing now
Wonder if you are thinking of me

I feel the night mist upon my face
The gentle breeze blows through my hair
I stand here feeling sort of lonely
Dreaming my love faraway, to here

I close my eyes and breathe deep
My lungs fill with the seawater in the air
I quietly blow a kiss towards the moonlight
For it to deliver to you with care

For I am awake, walking
You in your slumber, softly snore
I know the moon will deliver the kiss
To my beloved faraway amoré

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Rhea (219.65.207.4) -- Thursday, May 6 2004, 05:05 pm

( Beautiful work )Ship Of Dreams

Hi
I really liked and enjoyed reading your poem. While reading I felt as if I was standing on the deck of a ship....waiting for my beloved......very well written piece and romantic. It has that beautiful sense of timelessness....
Martin Vann (4.244.174.10) -- Thursday, May 6 2004, 07:23 pm

Love a poem that shares a picture, like this one

Dreamer,

Simply, beautiful, I can see so many warm hearts, standing where you are.

MartinV
barb (66.46.230.18) -- Friday, May 7 2004, 09:30 pm

So nice

Your writing is so very warm and tender. ty
Terrie* (65.136.7.150) -- Saturday, May 8 2004, 04:03 pm

Dreamer,

i agree w/all 3 writers especially Rhea...i was also standing there waiting for the man that i love....beautifully writtten..Terrie*
Tammy (66.38.4.173) -- Saturday, May 8 2004, 07:33 pm

Dreamer

How beautiful, and romantic this poem is....
 
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