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What Do You Want From Me
19 July, 2001
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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Who do you think you are?

Drive me crazy and cry me sane
Tell me that my way is wrong and I'm to blame
You call me up and cuss me out
Ask my opinion and then you scream and shout

What do you want from me?
Just what do you want from me?

You say its love then show me pain
Dashing my dreams till my tears are like rain
You pick me up and then push me down
You wonder why I don't want you anywhere around

What do you want from me?
Just what do you want from me?

Judge me guilty when I commit no crime
You think you're holier than thou, so sublime
Read my mind then hear my words
It's your version to the world that is so absurd

What do you want from me?
What do you want from me?

Just Who do you think you are?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Kristen () -- Wednesday, July 25 2001, 05:00 am

wow

Extremely powerful sweetie....
Debbie (66.81.215.240) -- Friday, February 7 2003, 02:48 am

Wonderful and powerful

I thought this poem did a wonderful job of expressing outraged emotions. I did not know how else to get ahold of you, rebecca, but please email me back. I would love to use your poem as an example of the Hydraulic theory for my pysch 145 class. Only my professor would see it. Would that be alright?
Josh (205.188.208.106) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 05:25 am

Great poem

This poem is honestly one of the best poems that I've read
JenniferCousins La (199.80.124.12) -- Monday, April 28 2003, 08:55 pm

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great poem. thanks for sharing
Sabrina (192.168.1.18) -- Monday, May 19 2003, 07:15 pm

good

I like this poem a lot cause it reminds me of my stepdad. It fits him perfectly
meagan (69.11.12.88) -- Sunday, October 26 2003, 08:19 pm

great poem

i like this poem i dont nkow why i just do
courtney (205.158.96.64) -- Thursday, December 18 2003, 01:29 am

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this poem was very tuching and belong in the poetry book on new york. the words can touch in the human soul in such a way that it gives a shock. i enjoyed it and thank you for sharing.
Morgan (204.81.7.14) -- Friday, December 19 2003, 01:34 pm

Great Peom!!!

Your Peom was Express very well I have been in the same situation when you think eveyone is a gainst to and It doesn't feel so great!
Lullebell1 (152.163.252.102) -- Friday, January 9 2004, 11:51 pm

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I love this poem it sounds like exactly what im goin through even though mine is about my dad but still it is perfect in every way
LinzAy (65.35.22.28) -- Saturday, January 10 2004, 04:02 am

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I love it!!
TAMI (66.25.163.13) -- Friday, January 16 2004, 01:16 am

I understand ...

I have been there .... thanks for sharing this poem ..
jerome (216.41.25.182) -- Wednesday, April 7 2004, 04:55 pm

i am feeling it

this peom enlight me cause what you are talking about really touch my soul thank you for sharing.
Elishia (October 25, 200) -- Friday, May 14 2004, 05:00 am


Stephanie (209.112.213.156) -- Friday, June 18 2004, 09:03 pm

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Kinda sad, but it to reminds me of my dad. To bad that so many on here said the same thing. I think fathers need to get it together, causing some permanent damage here.
Dreamer (4.227.50.238) -- Friday, June 18 2004, 09:18 pm

Stephanie

Funny that everyone seems to take this as a parent I am speaking of.. In my case it was my bi-polar child.. I am glad so many of you can empathize.
Queen Selen (66.217.39.69) -- Wednesday, June 23 2004, 10:41 pm

anyone that reads this poem finds a connection

it almost feels that as you were making this, you were dedicating to all of us during our time of pain.
 
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