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To Be Shared
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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As tight as can be youíre beauty is hidden,
Only your outer shell shows it self to the world beyond,
This can not deceive to others youíre true self,
Iíve known you for three years now,
Iíve seen you open and become so bright,
Iíve seen you close to protect from the cold,
No matter how you appear to others this is how I see,

Your beautiful this you know,
Putting many others to shame, you do this well
You protect yourself from harm,
If you could talk youíd have a tongue that could cut,
Like a true model your movements are all planed,
Youíre fragrance is so enticing,
Like the beauty you hold; it must be shared,
To hold such beauty for only one must be a crime,

So this Iíll do and do for you,
Iíll take you by the stem to cut you free,
Youíre colour will shine, youíre fragrance will last,
As I find a vase to reflect who you are,
The rose I grow every year.

------- Author's Notes -------

Everything has a beauty with it, open you're eyes and this you'll see

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.215.182) -- Sunday, April 25 2004, 03:21 am

Clive,

beautifuly expressed...very movin' thanx for sharin'...so much beauty in your words...Terrie*
Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Sunday, April 25 2004, 04:53 pm

I can see almost see it!

Hello Clive! Nature is breathtaking, and such a lovely sight to look at...It can remind you of all sorts of beautiful things...Clouds, which sometimes take the form of hot mashed potatoes, and the sun pours over into it like hot butter...The grass, which sometimes looks like a painting, with a stroke of an artists paintbrush----as well as the lovely canvas in the sky!! I love your insight on nature...The way you can actually see the beauty of it, and compare it to something------so expressful!! Delightful poem "poetic genius", on nature entitled, "To Be Shared"!!

Meridian
Clive (63.184.97.9, 20) -- Sunday, April 25 2004, 05:43 pm

Thank you Terrie & Meridian

Thank you both for you're ever kind words,
Meridian so when's dinner ? and that walk in the country ;-)
Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Sunday, April 25 2004, 05:57 pm

Hhhahahaha

You must be talking about the mashed potatoes and butter Clive; right? hahhahhaha. Dinner will be ready around 7p.m. lol! A walk in the country eh? Ok then.......let's walk. Hahahhaha.... You're very welcome! I could absolutely relate to your nature comparisons!! Great job "Poetic Genius"!

Meridian
 
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