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Today Is Different
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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Today I lay looking at you,
Talking to you we were so calm,
Talked about our past and present,
Talked about how our love had grown,
Many times weíd passed always just good friends,
Youíve held my hand as Iíve walked with you,
Today is different feelings have grown,
Weíve talked so much and laughed a lot,
Held each other all warm inside,
Today we touched like never before,
Today we kissed for real this time,
I touched your skin with gentle hands,
You held me tight, tighter than before,
Itís funny how I can hear you speak,
Youíre lips arenít moving so whatís this I hear,
Youíre minds in thought and I now understand,
Our eyes can see all in our souls,
Iím glad for today it was our time,
I feel complete knowing we now are one,
Tomorrow will bring another day bright,
Iíll come back here and meet you then.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.142) -- Monday, April 26 2004, 05:29 pm

Wonderful Clive!!

You've outdid yourself on this one CBR a.k.a
Mr. Clive B. Ringshall! Your poems just keep getting better and better every time I read them!!! You have so much depth in your poetry, that, you can almost see what you write in action....Especially lines 10-14....Touching, kissing, and holding with gentle hands....
When you find love; the person who completes you; the one who's flesh of your flesh and bone of your bone...... The one who shapes and molds you into what you become....love.....what a feeling!! You must be excited Clive!! "Today Is Different" was a geniune poem!!! Hooray for Mr. Ringshall!!

Meridian
Terrie* (65.148.212.63) -- Monday, April 26 2004, 09:05 pm

Clive,

i gotta agree w/Meridian you makes us a part of your poetry in the way that you breath life into them...Thanx for sharing Terrie*
Buttney (65.4.31.229) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 02:19 am

Bravo!!!

I really enjoyed reading your poem. I could envision myself falling in love with a close freind while reading it. It is very visual.
Sara (216.39.188.31) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 02:54 am

very nice

i absolutely luved it! your words jump out being very realistic. i cant stop thinkin of past saterday when i got together with a close friend. very lovely Clive. nice work
Clive (63.184.97.216,) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 05:14 am

Thank You All

You are all too kind,
You all give me the insight to write better, and I always hope you will be able to feel.
Thank You all for being a positive in my life
 
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