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Making Time..
27 April, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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making time
to share
something simple
a few moments of mine
to give you
in this busy life of mine
making too much time
to greet you upon a new day
or making time
to just say good night
in my own special way
making too much time
to share what I did
or plan to do for the day
making time just to say hi
making time on my own time
is not too much time after all..
in case I couldn't be there
to tend to something new
incase the next time
when making time
may not be mine to give

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.97.216,) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 06:44 am

Time the imortal sin

We can all give time,
But looking for that time,
tends to take up to much time,
I like this poem Terrie,
Very good you do so well when putting words together.
Your Friend Clive
MartinV (4.244.171.34) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 03:11 pm

Time is a gift, when it is shared

Terrie;

You are among the very few, who I have known that could write about time as a gift, and not feel it as grains of sand, slowly grinding us down until we reach the bottom of the vial, and find, we have no more time.

Beautiful
MartinV
Meridian (205.188.116.142) -- Tuesday, April 27 2004, 04:37 pm

Hey Terrie*

Good morning Terrie*! This is Meridian, just saying that I enjoyed your poem, entitled, "Making Time"! Yes, everyone needs to make time, to visit the sick, the homeless, making time with the family, to go out and take a vacation with them..... Because time is an issue nowadays..... It's not that much time to do anything anymore. There's one event after another. But, with your helpful message "Making Time", you've made it clear, that things can be set aside, whether busy or not, to make time, and I love it Terrie! Wonderful!!!

Meridian

(SMILE)
Terrie* (65.150.170.65) -- Wednesday, April 28 2004, 03:32 am

Clive,

makes me smile w/much content that you liked this poem..my words are spoken by way of my heart..the only way i know how..Thank you....
Terrie*
Terrie* (65.150.170.65) -- Wednesday, April 28 2004, 03:41 am

Martin,

caring/sharing time is precious in itself...it was given to us as a gift not to keep but yes to share,glad you enjoyed it...Terrie*
Terrie* (65.150.170.65) -- Wednesday, April 28 2004, 03:45 am

Meridian,

thank you for your time in sharing your lovely comment, yes and what a perfect example you all have shown in taking the time to read/comment.
Have a beautiful fun filled day..Terrie*
 
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