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My Thoughts On What Love Could Be
30 April, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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I think love could be that certain feeling inside you that if you're not open to you dont know what it is. The feeling that controls every other feeling in your heart, every emotion. It's that awesome beauty you see when you look at that one person. The beauty that magnifies over everything else. The beauty that covers the ugliness.....that replaces it so you don't even see it. It's the truth that makes up for every single lie. The happiness that makes the pain obsolete, makes it seem as though it were never there. It's the smile that never leaves your heart..even if that one person made you cry. It's the smile that doesn't care about the tears because it's stronger. It's the way that persons touch feels more extraordinary than anything you've ever felt...even if that person is just holding your hand. It's the kiss that makes your whole body, heart, and soul go weak. It's looking into that persons eyes and wanting to know everything that fills their heart mind and soul. It's the things you want to do for that person. It's how money is no object, how money means nothing....how you spend it all just knowing that that 2 hour movie you spent with that person satisfied them in even the smallest way. It's counting down the seconds to when that person will be knocking on your door. It's going through something terrible and talking to everyone else on the planet but you don't feel better because you still haven't talked to that person yet, you haven't heard their voice to soothe your heart. It's how every word that person says completes you.

Is that what love could be?

------- Author's Notes -------

I responded to a question I asked in a thread on the MB. Kind of weird, but this is the answer I gave myself. I found it touching...but maybe that's just me. I felt it had a poetic touch to it so I wanted it to be here in the open for those who don't visit the message forum. I don't even know if this is anything like what true love is, and I'm sure true love goes so much deeper than this, but these are my thoughts on love for now. Hope you enjoyed :)

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Saturday, May 1 2004, 03:33 pm

Read the 1st 3 lines....

Hey LinzAy! How's beautiful day, Miss linzAy, linzAy! Mine is wonderful!! After reading the 1st three lines, I didn't have to go any further, because your thoughts on love is just grand and true!! Love goes much deeper than we understand, and should cover all ugliness, as you've stated..... That is exactly what love is!!!
Very poetic Miss Linzay, LinzAy! Enjoy your day!!

Meridian
LinzAy (65.33.91.250) -- Monday, May 3 2004, 02:02 am

Meridian

Thankyou!!!
Terrie* (65.148.211.242) -- Monday, May 3 2004, 02:17 am

LinZay,

you've touched the soul of love..you do know love.. i have to agree w/our poetic friend Meridian this is definently what love is....a feeling that doesn't go away...almost like recieving a hug from God..this is an absolutely beautiful poem..thank you for sharing your love w/us ...Terrie*
LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Monday, May 3 2004, 02:33 pm

Terrie

Touched the soul of love.....i think there may be inspiration for a poem in this comment :) Thankyou for reading and enjoying and commenting. Do I know love? If so, I'm scared. For that means I'm in love with someone I shouldn't be just bc things have been very screwed up. But I guess it would make sense that I know love w/this person bc i've never let him out of my heart even after some horrid things were done. "Of course I know Love...I know you" I guess I can sing that line to somebody now. Oh no......
Tricia (65.161.77.75) -- Monday, May 3 2004, 08:43 pm

goosebumps

You have the power of love in the touch of your hands. I read this and goosbumps covered my body. For love is so powerful, and this opened my eyes to several aspects of love. A wise friend once told me, You can not choose who you love, for the heart you can not control" I hold those words deep with in me. thanks for sharing
everett (209.240.207.43) -- Tuesday, May 4 2004, 06:24 am

perfect

i couldnt have described love any better myself. it really was a beautiful piece of writing. such talent you have :)
LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Tuesday, May 4 2004, 02:50 pm

Tricia and Ev

Tricia : Thankyou for letting my poem touch you as it did. And thankyou for the wonderful comment :)

Ev: Ev, I really didn't know that I could describe love this way bc i didnt know that I knew it....I'm still doubting that I do, I never have before........ Thankyou for "el" comment:)
 
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