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Dreamin' About You
16 September, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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I'm gonna
Find me a woman
Who can sing
Like Stevie Nicks
And Patsy Cline
She's Gonna
Have to be a Gypsy
To hang in
With a highway heart like mine

And I'm gonna
Start lookin' hard
Yes, I'm gonna
Start lookin' hard
Oh, I'm gonna
Start lookin' hard
Soon as I'm through
Dreamin' about you

I'm gonna
Find me a woman
Who knows more
Than a little bit about love
She gonna
Have to be tenacious
And hold on tight
When the road gets rough

And I'm gonna
Start lookin' hard
Yes, I'm gonna
Start lookin' hard
Oh, I'm gonna
Start lookin' hard
Soon as I'm through
Dreamin' about you

I'm gonna
Find me a woman
Who can Pull on her boots
And roll up her sleeves
She's gonna
Have to be a dancer
To rock it up
With a tough dog like me

And I'm gonna
Start lookin' hard
Yes, I'm gonna
Start lookin' hard
Oh, I'm gonna
Start lookin' hard
Soon as I'm through
Dreamin' about you
Soon as I'm through
Dreamin' about you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (63.208.46.31) -- Thursday, September 18 2003, 08:52 pm

Gypsy in his arms, WOW!

Ben,

Sounds to like a Gypsy girl, is just what you need, she can rock & roll, and she knows the road, and can sure, take care of dog like you.

However, one thing I'm sure you know, do her wrong and she will roll up her sleeves, then cut your worthless heart out, and yes, she will feed it to the dogs.

Treat her right and you will be, in the arms of the woman, all, us guys seek. Let us know if, you survive this quest, if, we don't hear from you, well, nice knowing you.

Good poem Ben, thanks for letting me have some fun, as you always do.

MartinV
Ben (67.123.245.148) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 06:07 am

Thanks Martin for that.....

Thanks Martin for reading and commenting on Dreamin' About You. I appreciate the feed back very much. Do they REALLY cut your heart out and feed it to dogs, though? Maybe I should just stay single! Ha! Ha! Haaaa!
Terrie* (65.148.233.250) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 08:05 am

GREAT POEM BEN...

'ay Ben,i know of a traveling nurse that has been to all four corners of the world, that slips into her boots when she rides her Harley... maybe i should direct her your way, before her next assignment...ya have to watch out though ,this traveling nurse is ....................
Ben (67.123.245.148) -- Saturday, September 20 2003, 02:41 am

Nurse with boots and Harley riding...

Thank you, Terrie* for your comment, I am glad you like this one! Now, as for that nurse with boots riding a Harley..mmmm..Maybe at this stage a nurse Is what I need! Ha! Ha! When I get old she could just chain my wheel-chair to the back of that steel stallion and drag me around at 100 mph all over God's creation!! Ya know, Terrie*, I think you kinda LIKE just scaring me out of my skin, don't you? You're probably laughing like a maniac right now, huh? Go on, just admit it!! Ha! Ha! Haaaa! Now please, excuse me. I've got to go find my skin. I'm probably about 200 miles away from where I jumped out of it!! THANKS, Terrie* !!
Terrie* (65.148.208.168) -- Saturday, September 20 2003, 06:02 am

Ben you so funny.......

Ben, sorry 'bout that...i will catch up w/you when your intact..heh..i wouldn't want to start a rumor hehe i couldn't bare you to lose face...hehe..hopefully by the time you travel my way you put yourself-together hehe...because i may not recognize ya w/o your skin...ya know me too well...he he he he he.getting back to the subject..that was an awesome poem.....
 
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