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You Live In All That Give
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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Out of the blue you held me tight,
Thought this would feel just right,
At night you appear as if by magic,
Always giving more than the time before,
In good bye we last so long,
Hello is quick so I can see youíve grown,
On the couch you come just to touch,
In bed at night youíre different again,
More caring in that sexual way,
In the morning I wake with you still near,
Expected youíre not, always pleasant to receive,
Iíll always be here to give in return,
At times youíre surprised when it appears to you,
The best time is unexpected you tell me dear,
Remember the time that started it all,
Just to comfort a lonely tear,
You come from know where,
And go back to the same,
You come to anyone who has youíre name,
Always you live in all that give,
Conveying a trust and so much more.

------- Author's Notes -------

I set a challenge with a few friends to write a theme on "A HUG" without saying it. this is what I came up with.
Be happy in all you do.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.211.29) -- Monday, May 3 2004, 03:35 am

Clive,

your work keeps me coming back....this was very touching..your caring heart is so full of love, a hug a non-verbal form of communication to express ..a simple jesture of concern through a HUG like a smile means awhole lot.thank you for putting your heart out for all to touch and see a friendly hug back at ya!! keep that pen close to your heart..Terrie*
Meridian (152.163.252.98) -- Monday, May 3 2004, 03:29 pm

A Poem of Thankfulness

THis poem is pure delight! "Just to comfort a lonely tear" was very well written.... I like the tone usage, and the verbs in your marvellous poem!! You always write with compassion, and sincerity, and I love it! Good job on, "You Live In All That Give"!

Meridian
clive (63.184.97.252,) -- Sunday, May 9 2004, 03:37 am

My two fav ladies

Thank You both for your words of strength and kindness
 
Name:                                           Remember Me

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