Darling
3 May, 2004
Author: LinzAy
Her violent thrashing
Her violent screams
Sure to be her nightmare
It's my dream
...Cry for help, darling, cry...
She gasps for air
Tries to grab an outstretched hand that isn't there
Begging...
Slowly coming to the realization I no longer care
...Cry to me, darling, cry...
Her attempts to survive weaken
Her screams turn to chokes
I would have never done this
If it weren't a thought she provoked
...Cry to the Heavens, darling, cry...
And she's done for
No longer can she function
Meet death now, my love
This is your introduction
...Die, my darling, die...
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| everett (209.240.207.43) -- Tuesday, May 4 2004, 06:19 am wow awesome poem linz! i love how creepy it is. love it :) |
| LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Tuesday, May 4 2004, 02:38 pm Thankyou Ev!!!!! :D |
| Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Tuesday, May 4 2004, 06:42 pm Hey LinzAy! Motion Picture Movies presents..."Darling"........coming to a theater near you..... Spooky, intense, and lovely.......leaves your eyes glued to the screen---comment from New York Times....hahhahahha....I really love the action in your poem! The suspense! Which leaves my eyes bulged until I finish reading the whole thing! And you've got a lot of talent LinzAy, LinzAy! Keep up the DELIGHTFUL work!!!! Smile LinzAy! Meridian |
| LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Wednesday, May 5 2004, 03:37 pm LOL! Glad it kept ya in suspense and stuff and that you enjoyed it so much!!!!! Thanks for taking the time to read my stuff and enjoying it. Thankyou for the smile too!!! :) |
| crude name (24.53.211.252) -- Sunday, June 6 2004, 11:28 pm wow this one was really creapy buddy kinds crazy i love it its great love ya |
| LinzAy (172.142.222.150) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 04:21 am heh....thought ya might like it and find it weird comin from me :) luv ya 2 |
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