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Your Eyes
4 May, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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Seen in the eyes of the one that I want to be
So in love with so sincerely
I want to love him for the rest of My life
Won't be complete if you aren't by my side
We could share a love we'd never have to hide
I see this all just by looking into your

Your eyes
They tell me of a life
They tell me of a dream
They sing to me a beautiful song
Your eyes
They show me a life
They show me a dream
They show me everything I've wanted for so long

Shown to me by the beauty that is all alone
You could also use a place where love could grow
I'd be willing to open all of my heart to You
Have got me captivated by the things you do
You've got me captivated by the way you move
But it's mostly what I see when I look into your

Your eyes
They tell me of a life
They tell me of a dream
They sing to me a beautiful song
Your eyes
They show me a life
They show me a dream
They show me everything I've wwanted for so long

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 07:02 pm

WAY TO GO!

Hey Miss linzAy! Sorry, I didn't comment earlier, because I wanted to.... I love your love just beginning poem!! Looking through your lover's eyes and seeing true, pure beauty!!! Beauty is definitely in the eys of the beholder!!

GOOD JOB LINZAY!

Smile,

Meridian
LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 07:08 pm

Meridian

Thankyou soooooo very much!!!!!

:D
everett (209.240.207.43) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 07:19 pm

loved it

wow what a great poem. its so heartfelt and meaningful. a lot of emotion..love it.
LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 07:33 pm

Ev

:D Tunkoo Tunkoo!
 
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