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If Only
Author: Counsellina

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If only for a moment you could touch this hand of mine,
A warmth would surely flow my love that speaks of love supine,
If only you could hold me and feel this raging fire,
Our eyes would dance in rhythm to this flaming hot desire...

This tapestry of love we weave, it`s threads have come to bare,
A texture we have given it, a patterned depth so rare,
A lifetime of creations we blend with looms of love,
Designed to wrap these lonely souls, fallen from above...

If only cornucopial fruits that splash from seed and earth,
Would nourish primal hungers that scream of pain abirth,
If only our tomorrows were filled with what we dream,
These two hearts forever dancing would forever reign supreme...

As an artist paints his picture, with strokes and brushes fair,
This canvas heavy laden with loving colour flairs,
Creations we are moulding of a lifetime yet to come,
Please take my heart my dearest love, for two shall become one...

If only I could see you each moment of each day,
If only I could hold you, feeling our hearts sway,
If only your sweet lips my love, I could taste on mine,
Would my heart forever dance in rhthym and in rhyme...

If only ~

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.54.80) -- Saturday, May 8 2004, 08:37 am

Great Poem

WOW....Great poem, I truely loved it!!!!!!!
Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 07:13 pm

So emotional

Counsellina! Very exquisite poem, on "If only"! "If you only knew" "If only you were here" ..... This sentimental poem almost had me bawling.... Very good and I loved your comparisons-----(metaphors and verbs)! Terrific C!

Smile,

Meridian
 
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