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More Aware
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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It was a quiet day as I recall,
Without asking you invaded my soul,
Unlike ever before I never knew you,
You took my life and took what you wanted,
Worst of all I let you in,
Never thought Iíd be so unprotected,
Never thought I needed to be,
But now you took my dreams,
Now you have my memories too,
Iíll rebuild them all, better than before,
Next time Iíll be more aware,
Youíll have to try harder if you dare return,
Iíve wised up to your invasive ways,
No longer will you walk over my soul again.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.150.167.16) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 06:34 pm

Clive,

this was soo sad, i send a hug to ease the pain, no one ever wants to feel stripped like this, we must guard our heart. in my search for REAL LOVE again, hope i find the same love i had before, and i'm sure you will find that love , as we speak it is in search of you..great writing..Terrie*
Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 06:40 pm

Watch Out

Hello Mr. Clive! Betrayal and friendship lost runs neck and neck almost....... It's a hurtful thing when some people go through a hard time... Whether it's love, friendship, or anything, just watch out Clive! Be sure that you have your imaginary detector on........ a detector of Real love, as Terrie stated, or just Real Trust..... Have fun Clive!

Smile,

Meridian
 
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