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Aware
10 May, 2004
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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It was a quiet day as I recall,
Without asking you invaded my soul,
Unlike ever before I never knew you,
You took my life and took what you wanted,
Worst of all I let you in,
Never thought I’d be so unprotected,
Never thought I needed to be,
But now you took my dreams,
Now you have my memories too,
I’ll rebuild them all, better than before,
Next time I’ll be more aware,
You’ll have to try harder if you dare return,
I’ve wised up to your invasive ways,
No longer will you walk over my soul again.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 10:08 pm

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love it! very powerfull
barb (66.46.241.129) -- Monday, May 10 2004, 11:45 pm

good lesson learned

very good showing of your feelings. your anger and disappointment shines through this.
 
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