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Dreaming Of England
1 September, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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Tall brick walls
With Ivy overgrown
Walking along
Streets of cobblestone
Dreaming of England
I'm dreaming of England

Kicking around
All over London town
Stop in for tea
That's alright by me
Dreaming of England
I'm dreaming of England

A small child squeals
At a Bobby on wheels
Bobby rings his bell
And tips his hat as well
I'm dreaming of England
Dreaming of England

I have seen
The land of the free
Now my heart calls me
Across the rolling sea
Dreaming of England
I'm dreaming of England

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Enchantress (204.32.65.109) -- Wednesday, September 3 2003, 12:39 am

WOW!

Again, GREAT JOB! I loved it, made me want to go to England as I read it. I've always wanted to go there, Loved this one because it nearly took me there. BEAUTIFUL WORK!
Ben (67.123.245.73) -- Wednesday, September 3 2003, 01:07 am

Enchantress, when I release....

Enchantress, when I release my next CD can I get you to write the review? Ha! Ha! Haaa! I really, really do appreciate your positive responses to my little writings, and I thank you soooo much!
Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 08:22 am

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wow you make music? cool!!what type of musci do you sing? rock punk blues what lol?
Ben Laney (63.194.136.161) -- Wednesday, August 25 2004, 12:44 am

Yes, Leah, I do make...

Yes, Leah, I do make music. Mostly the kind that has lyrics which can be sung. Haa! Haaa! I like writing in all styles because I like variety. Thanks so much for asking and commenting, Girlfriend! Kind Regards, Ben
ben (80.6.138.109) -- Wednesday, August 25 2004, 01:01 pm

ben

i love the poem,as i live here its nice to hear somone make it sound good,
good one mate!
ben,
p.s. land of the free?
Ben Laney (68.127.169.72) -- Wednesday, August 25 2004, 06:40 pm

ben, Thank you for your positive...

ben, Thank you for your positive comment on Dreaming of England, I am glad you like it. As for your question, "land of the free?"; I totally understand that many think that's so in words only, and that many of our freedoms are being taken away by the government. Still, my heart calls me across the rolling sea at times! Thanks again! Best Regards, Ben
Meridian (64.12.112.51) -- Wednesday, August 25 2004, 07:00 pm

Dreaming of England eh?

Wales is nice isn't it? Ben, you never stop to amuse and interest me with your visionary words!

Good job BL!
Smiles,
Meri
Ben Laney (68.127.169.72) -- Wednesday, August 25 2004, 07:09 pm

Meridian, a "Wale" of a time can be had in..

Meridian, a "Wale" of a time can be had in Wales, I am sure! Thank you sooo much for your kind words, I am happy to hear that you are both amused and interested by my writing. I appreciate your letting me know, too! Best Regards & SMILES to you, too! -Ben
 
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