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Words Of Silence
Author: Terrie*

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another year passes by
questons go unanswered
the wind still blows
the sun still shines

but...
the words have became silent
it is hard for me to back away
and leave you here all on you own
as we approach upon a new day
i realize ..
i am the one that was left all alone

I re-nounced the words
of my heart to you
and still nothing more can be done nor said
you stopped loving me today
my love simply refuses to die

I longed to hear a word from you
i've sat here far too long
it is time for me to shake
these mighty tender injured wings
and attempt to fly away


tomorrow is another day
before the sun goes down
I'll learn something new
and hopefully before the sunrises
i'll feel a breakthrough
of something come true


in hopes that God
will hear my silent cries
and place me in the arms
of an Angel
as i search
for somebody new
and listen to the words
that echo in his heart
as they once echoed deeply inside of yours

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Tuesday, May 11 2004, 07:42 pm

Terrie......

I'm very sorry to hear about your loss..... But to know that they ascended to Heaven is just grand..... My soal is afloat....
"Words Of Silence" was very heart touching.
It's a hurtful thing when someone very dear to you, dies....
I like the words in your poem.... very deep...

Sincerely,

Meridian
MartinV (4.244.174.51) -- Tuesday, May 11 2004, 09:00 pm

You place his heart, in your prison, now set him

Terrie,

"I re-nounce the words of my heart to you," spoken, upon paper, but, not upon your heart. He loved you, as loving hearts, try to do, last for eternity, Terrie, that will never be, but a loving heart, will surpass your pain, of being alone, love lives, for eternity. No man can take his place. I know, you never meant to say, I re-nounce my words to you, they live as you breath, release yourself, we all know, love can cause pain, in a silent way. He loved you more, than your love of him. and now he says, free yourself, not from me, but of the obligation of our love, which, you alone, and not my heart, placed, apon, your self, now IT Sets you free.

I'm looking down, every night, and I see you cry, for some one else, he is real, yet still a dream, Terrie dear, release your love for me, give myself, that precious part of my heart, to him. I trust him, from far above, release the love, you save for me. give it all to him.
By the way, I'll always, be in love with you, just like him.
MartinV
Terrie* (65.148.233.165) -- Wednesday, May 12 2004, 12:48 am

Meri,

thank you for such a lovely comment, and yes it is very...very... hurtful when someone you love..dies..
Hugs..Terrie*
Terrie* (65.148.233.165) -- Wednesday, May 12 2004, 12:58 am

Martin,

actually i did mean to say renounced...i gave up claim ,my rights..i'm not saying i do not love him for i will always love him and my children wil be a constant reminder of that love we shared..i surrendered him to the lord...And i'm hoping the good Lord places the chosen one in my arms so that i can share the love i have in my heart and so much more...and i pray that he too will return that same love back to me .....thanx for your comment.Terrie*
 
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