Only September
1 September, 2003
Author: Ben Laney
Dark clouds are rolling
Across the sky
How did the summer
Slip by so fast?
I had been hoping
For more sunshine
Before Autumn's chill
Wilted the grass
Every mile I'm making
Pulls me away
A little farther
>From broken dreams
While every step I'm taking
Brings winter days
A whole lot closer
Than I want them to be
It's only September
And already the wind
Is blowing cold
It feels more like December
Though the leaves
Are just turning to gold
It's only September
I've still got the winter to go
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Enchantress (206.216.224.43) -- Monday, September 1 2003, 05:04 pm O'Tis such a beautiful time in the fall. I loved this poem, it's so descriptive and beautiful. I could almost see the color, taste the breeze, Nice work, I loved it! (again) BEAUTIFUL! |
| Ben (67.123.245.73) -- Monday, September 1 2003, 07:07 pm Again, Enchantress, thank you for your BEAUTIFUL words of encouragement! I appreciate and enjoy your comments very much! I relly do, mon! Ha! Ha! Haaa! Are you posting something soon, I hope? |
| Megan (152.163.253.98) -- Tuesday, September 2 2003, 02:40 am Its very intresting , good job. |
| Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 08:21 am You have really interesting poems Ben its like you really appreciate life! |
| Ben Laney (68.127.158.16) -- Monday, August 16 2004, 06:47 pm Megan, I am glad you found this one interesting and took the time to comment on it. I really do appreciate it very much. Thank you a lot! Best Regards, Ben |
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