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What Exactly Is Love...
11 May, 2004
Author: Jughead

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MY my.. What is love..?? Love is a sweet thing... a magnificant wonder... It helps to take you up high into the sky but when LOve disappears you will fall down no the hard cold floor... Many yearn fot true love.. but what is it... I need you.. Why wouldnt u give me a chance.. LEt me have a go... i really love u.. To me u are everything... You take my breathe away when i see you... I absolutely love it when u grab my wraist and pull me.. IT may be nothing to you but yes to me it means everything... I may not be the hunkiest guy nor the smartest person on earth buT i'm a person who would pamper you with my everlasting love and never never will i forget the way you smile...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Wednesday, May 12 2004, 08:14 pm

lovey dovey

Awwww....... Jughead, that was cute! I love your lines..... The way you write as if writing for a script in a play.....
You would be the perfect Romeo in the poem "Romeo and Juliet"
I can see you now, on one knee with flowers behind your back in one hand, for your girl....

Absolutely divine poem Jughead!
WOO HOO!

Have fun,
Meridian
Charmaine (220.255.42.135) -- Sunday, May 16 2004, 12:56 pm

Sweet.!

Its nice! So will you tell me who the gurl is yet?
dimples (202.89.42.181) -- Monday, January 24 2005, 09:35 am

im melting

this girl is sooooooooooooooo lucky to have a guy lyk you!!!!!1 go get'im tiger. grrrooowllllllll. u are SUCH a sweetie! i would melt if anyone said anything remotly like this to me. u are such a good writer!!!! *dimples*
Jughead (220.255.215.233) -- Monday, January 24 2005, 05:42 pm

Thank You

Gee thanks... Your so sweet... This was my very first poem... Your too a good writer keep it up?? Haha i sound so old...
 
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