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Dream Girl
1 July, 2002
Author: Maranda Berkley

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Why do guys fall in love with the wrong girl
When they fall in love with me?
I'm cold hearted and could care less
What kind of pain I make them feel

Don't fall in love with this girl
I'm right for you, you're wrong for me
I'll take all I can get and throw you away
Your dignity will be first to steal

Guys fall for the wrong girl
When they fall for me
I'm moody and deeply depressed
How can I learn to be loved when pain is all I feel?

Don't fall in love with the wrong girl
I promise you, the wrong one is me
I can't handle my own feelings let alone someone else's
Just face it, I'm nobody's dream

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Comments on this poem/writing:

captj11@hotmail.com (67.234.67.218) -- Wednesday, July 3 2002, 05:35 am

dream girl

shows lack of self worth, meant or otherwise, it says I am nothing, you get nothing, so there, are you satisfied? Tragic.
Pamela (199.216.176.5) -- Wednesday, July 3 2002, 05:35 am


maranda (4.18.16.14) -- Thursday, July 4 2002, 02:00 am

note from author to pamela

thank you much pamela. i am glad i could help you out a little with this poem. what it is truly about is a guy who quotes i am his "dream girl" and i just don't see how or why. we have been friends for not so long, kind of thrown together by a lie our mutual friend told the both of us. we have grown really close since, though he is in the army. he has just returned for a visit monday and his friend informed me that the guy says i am his dream girl. the feelings, unfortunately, are unrequited. so hence forth my efforts to make him realize i am not his dream girl- the moodiness, depression, blah blah blah, anything to make him NOT feel this way so i don't have to break a good friend's heart. anyway you look at the writing, whether it's not feeling good enough about yourself or trying to make someone feel that way to basically let yourself off the hook- it's a pretty shakey situtaion. honestly though, there are times when everyone feels "not good enough" but if your boyfriend is with you, there must be something there right? if the feelings are mutaul-give him the world. let him give you the world. you ARE worth it. anyone and everyone is. anyway it's better to have loved and lost than never loved at all as the saying goes, right?
Pamela (199.216.176.5) -- Thursday, July 4 2002, 03:30 am

True

Yeah, I guess you are right, maybe I should realize that there is something there. Thanks for writing back :o)
Becky (67.227.213.53) -- Wednesday, July 17 2002, 06:52 am

Why?

I know that this poem shows true feelings, but is expressing them really good? Don't even give these thoughts the time of day.
Natali Marey Hanson (205.119.119.66) -- Thursday, November 14 2002, 05:45 am

I know what this means!!!

I have this friend, and she is like this poem in every way. she plays guys like they have no feelings. she even told this kid she didn't care how he felt. she's a big jerk!!!!
 
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