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A Moment...
Author: Moonstarshine

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Silent heart
tired mind
shadows form
a face of you.
In my dreams
you come near
hold me
close in your
arms
I feel no fear
take me to
your soul
of love
where I
leave my sleep
behind..
and find
just you and me
and the beat
of our hearts.
Hold me close
till the night
departs..
let the sun
shine through
catch the
morning ray
and glistening
dew...
in my silent eyes
a picture
of me and
a lonesome
you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Friday, May 14 2004, 06:32 pm

The moon's star forever shines!!

MOONSTARSHINE! What's good? I really love your writing style.... Your feelings always touch the reader and can feel the beating of both hearts in your poem! I love the way you use two of the 5 senses in your poem; the eyes and ears!! Very descriptive! Enjoyable work Moon!

Smile moonstarshine!
Meridian
Tammy (66.38.4.58) -- Sunday, May 16 2004, 04:49 am

Moonstarshine

This is an amazing poem.....I love your poetry!!!!!!
 
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