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Singing With You
31 July, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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I woke up this morning
As the sun rose big and bright
A little breeze was blowing
Oh, I was feeling alright
Reached for my guitar
Because I thought I just might write
A song about how much fun
It was the other night

Weaving in sweet harmony
Like something I've never heard
You had me believing
You were meaning every word
Expressing so much feeling
I could not help but smile
It was the best evening
I've had in a while

That song, like a river,
Came pouring out of you
And sent my spirit soaring
Like the stars....beyond the moon

When I was singing with you
Ooh, ooh, ooh, ooh
Singing with you
It was music to my ears
To hear your heart.....coming through
Ooh, ooh, ooh, ooh
When I was singing with you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 09:06 am

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Sorry 4 going crazy w/ the comments I just like and respesct your writing
Ben Laney (65.135.87.189) -- Monday, July 19 2004, 02:24 am

Leah, go as crazy as you want...

Leah, go as crazy as you want, girl. I will never tire of your encouraging, positive comments. I am glad to know you respect like and my writing. I appreciate your words very much and I thank for them!

Kind Regards,
Ben
 
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