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Look Into My Eyes What Do You See
17 May, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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look into my eyes
what do you see?
you see a soul calm and content

look into my soul
what do you see?
you see and hear a heart beating once again

look into my heart
what do you see?
you see a woman accepting
and submitting to the love of one man

that has taken the time
to bring her back to life
by loving her deeply
with the passion
in his heart and soul

look at us what do you see?
you see a man and a woman
so madly in love.....
I love you babe...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, May 17 2004, 10:40 pm

With love

So sweet, so innocent, so passionate, so lovely! It's good when you find that missing part of your life..... And fulfill that hole.... All for love! How wonderful, so pure, so sweet, so geniune, so complete! Do you like that free style Terrie*? Hhahhaha....Have fun with your "Babe"!
None other than the MERI, MERI
Smile Terrie*
Terrie* (65.136.6.176) -- Tuesday, May 18 2004, 12:50 am

Meri,

i love anything that is free..haha you are amazing ,yeap when you find the missin' link it's kind of like a short circuit zappin' at ya...j/k it is a truely amazin' feelin' and my babe is one heck of a fine irresistible man..enjoy your day...thanx.Terrie*
Clive (63.184.0.55, 20) -- Tuesday, May 18 2004, 12:52 am

More Huggs

Hi Terrie my secret love,
Yes you still have love within you, you'll never forget what once was, nor should you ever be asked to. In time you'll find that love that person who'll hold you on cold winter nights and way beond,
You' meet that person who wants you more than life itself,
Together experiances new will become.
To hugg you to hold you walk hand in hand there you both shall be.
Loved you're words, always feel near when I read them.
Take care huggs Clive
Terrie* (65.148.233.56) -- Tuesday, May 18 2004, 03:01 am

Clive,

shhhhh... ahh yes to dream the comforts of the joy of love..oops sorry got lost in the moment there...haha..if ya feel near then ya must of felt me burst in flames as i read your comment..wheres that darn fire extinguisher,
thank you for such an embracing comment, i felt that...Terrie*
Clive (63.184.1.2, 207) -- Tuesday, May 18 2004, 04:11 am

anytime

When are you going to get a book Published?
I am trying to find a publisher that will gamble on me.
barb (66.46.241.167) -- Thursday, May 20 2004, 06:50 am

sweet

oh terrie after reading this made me thank-ful for the friendship and love I have with my ex-husband. we make better friends than husband and wife. His love and friendship means more after reading this. thanks for the wake-up call.:))))
Terrie* (65.147.241.69) -- Sunday, May 23 2004, 08:51 pm

Barb,

you were always thankful doll, this poem just gave you a nudge in the bumm as a reminder. as we all have to do every now and then..wake up calls , make us strong, i got my wake up call when i became a widow..many years ago and it took me this long to accept my strength , and accept love again.. i appreciate your comment, some marriages just weren't meant to be..it doesn't mean that it was a failure or a mistake..just a wrong decision..some people are better off as friends...i went out to a club w/a couple when i was taking marriage counseling classes at a nearby city college and guess what they were celebrating? ya got it a "divorce" they were more compatible as best buds...isn't that amazing? your comment was appreciated ..Terrie*
barb (66.46.241.144) -- Sunday, May 23 2004, 10:41 pm

thanks Terrie

yea sometimes we need a shake down. You got yours and you gave me mine. Thanks
barb (66.46.241.144) -- Sunday, May 23 2004, 10:46 pm

p s

oh yea my ex has known me for 30 years and still likes me.Now that's a compliment. Don't you think?
Terrie* (65.142.45.138) -- Sunday, May 23 2004, 11:24 pm

Barb,

for 30 years ? now doll that is an endearing compliment..you must be a very special lady in his life, as well as your electrofying personality to keep him remaining close to your heart....that is sweet....Terrie*
barb (209.112.24.154) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 11:22 pm

terrie

My personality isn't electrofying just that he is patient and has a good sense of humour. So all my faults he thinks are funny. Thanks for the compliment. You writing shows that you are intelligent, caring.
Terrie* (65.148.208.224) -- Tuesday, May 25 2004, 06:29 am

Barb,

your comments are to high in retrospect , but me intelligent not quite close, i lack the ability to learn and understand , i have selective knowledge haha, i'm programmed to one level of degree and that is just the caring part..and a listener ...i guess i owe that to motherhood huh? thank you for you comments..you strike me as a person whom is very special to all you meet, plus like myself you are a lover of life and people ( can't forget my pets..they are special to me..gotta get thru them to get to me) i am a hugger and a toucher.. i believe in the healing touch..contact is an important vital in friendship as well as relationships..we can learn from you....Terrie*
barb (206.191.91.170) -- Tuesday, May 25 2004, 02:31 pm

thanks terrie

your comments are so nice and warm makes me tingle with pride.And I'm a toucher too. mine is a habit ,if I like you I touch your arm If I don't like you I slap your face Hha Hha. No seriously nothing makes a person feel wannted like a simple hug. right?
Terrie* (65.150.175.75) -- Thursday, May 27 2004, 12:36 am

Barb,

thanx for your feed back..now go enjoy yourself a good evenin' stay sweet....Terrie*
courney (151.197.43.43) -- Tuesday, March 6 2007, 06:18 pm

ask

can i use this poem
Terrie* (75.37.55.245) -- Wednesday, March 7 2007, 02:26 am

Courney

thank you for readin', yes you may use this poem..in return.... out of respect...i only ask ,that you acknowledge the credit where it belongs...have a lovely evenin'
 
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