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10:47 Pm
Author: Everett

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10:47 pm
A lot of times i dont know what to say, or
how to express my feelings the right way.
So ill sit in my room and put these thoughts on paper.
It helps, most of the time.
Sometimes ill struggle with the first line.
Right now, i dont like the way i feel.
Maybe tommorow will be better, give my thoughts time to heal.
I wonder what i will think of this poem when i read it again.
I'll be my own worst critic and wonder why i even picked up a pen.
Time to end this now and dream into the night.
I write this last line as i tun off the light.
11:19 pm...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (64.12.102.39) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 07:38 pm

''''''

Love this Ev! I go through this ALL THE TIME!!!
Perfect way to write about it!
everett (67.29.162.133) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 06:17 am

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thanks!!
Martin Vann (65.56.171.129) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 03:26 pm

I enjoy, real words, from real people, this is real.

Everett,

I enjoy the words of anyone who writes exactly the way they feel. I can see you working to find the words and that is what makes this poem real, to me.

MartinV
barb (66.46.230.81) -- Friday, April 4 2003, 03:03 am

thinking

very honest ,I too have a hard time thinking of a writing but then I get a phonecall that is nice or it ticked me off so I write down what I felt and then it comes together that's why I don't ryhme my poems.I have to think to hard and I don't like thinking. Ha Ha
everett (67.29.161.94) -- Friday, April 4 2003, 11:38 pm

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Thank you Martin

lol barb, i dont usually ryhme my poems either but lately i have been. i guess i wanted to try somethin new ya know :)
barb (66.46.230.115) -- Friday, April 4 2003, 11:56 pm

new is good

If I feel like thinking then I try to rhyme my poems.but usually they don't rhyme. I'm going to try and make some rhyme just to be different.Haa
barb (66.46.230.115) -- Saturday, April 5 2003, 12:01 am

oh yea

I wrote one poem that really rhymes it is called "Request" I was upset when I wrote it.
everett (67.29.162.111) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 06:59 am

woops

i didnt see your reply until just now lol. so ya wrote a poem that rhymes? did you post here on the site? id love to read it :)
 
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