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Moon Light Love
18 May, 2004
Author: ShyHeart

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All the words, we have shared, one night, came together
The softness of your beauty, breathing, over me
I finally, understood, flesh, is not, a lover’s heart,
Passion is just a part, of my, love for you

You were sleeping on your side, facing me
Oh, we were both so, tired, end of another, long day
I was laying on my back, hands, clasp, behind my neck
Moon Light, shining, through our bed-room…, felt you touching me

I, rolled over, saw your lovely face, lit up in the moon light,
Saw your silken hair, as it flowed, across your cheek,
You were fast asleep, God, I wanted you,
Felt my passion rise and wanted to, just, touch you,
So I did…, slipped your hair back, behind your ear

I thought, I saw you smile, as you felt my lips, soft as the moon-light,
I shared with you., you were fast asleep, how, can I disturb, paradise
I felt, my passion rise, more for loving you
Than for touching you…, I kept that moment true

I let you sleep, you never knew, I had, made love to you

With just the touch, of “Moon Light Love”

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Wednesday, May 19 2004, 05:13 pm

Magical

Mr. Vann, Mr. Vann! He's hot for passion, someone give him a fan! Hello Martin! Nice to see you smiling.... Very descriptional, great imagery, visionary, great details, great everything! You longed for her, but didn't want to disturb her while she slept... Aww, Martin! Maybe you'll get your chance tonight! Hhaha....
Very good KOP!
Smiles,
Meri
Martin Vann (4.244.174.75) -- Wednesday, May 19 2004, 06:21 pm

I'm lucky every night, God let me be a poet.

Meridian,

I love the spirit in your heart.

All poets, are lucky every night, what we write is about our needs, I love my dreams, hold them close to me every night, sometimes I sleep, sometimes not, I'm sure you know what I mean. Sweet Moon Light dreams to you.

Wow, do I love, Dreamersreality!

MartinV
P.S.
Thanks for the fan, my pen was getting hot.
Moonstarshine (202.141.248.122) -- Saturday, May 22 2004, 04:04 pm

Martin V.......

It is romantically beautiful ..loved the poem...the desire to love and yet feel completely loved..without a touch..speaks of a different kind of love...true..
Martin Vann (4.244.87.211) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 02:28 pm

Like A Treasure Chest, But, You Leave It Unopened

Moonstarshine,

Isn't it fantastic, that we can creat our own treasures, find them buriend deep beneath the layers of our soul, in dreams. Then, best of all, we may decide, to grab the treasure that we find, or, have the respect to leave it as we found it, so that we can share the moment, on another day.

Thank You,
MartinV
Tammy (66.38.54.128) -- Thursday, June 3 2004, 09:59 am

Martin V

WOW...How beautiful, romantic, and magical this poem is!!!!!!!
Martin Vann (63.185.65.127) -- Thursday, June 17 2004, 11:31 pm

Isn't Love, Magic, in itself, and hard to find?

Tammy,

Just wanted you to know, I wanted her, the flame, burned in my soul, yet, she was asleep. Yes, I could arouse, and wake her up, but Tammy, you know, I made the most passionet love to her, even though, she did not know. I was with her, physically, even as she slept, her heart knew. L0ve is powerful and it speaks and if, we listen, we feel its power, to me. a fair trade for pleasure. Sleep, my darlin, I will see you in the morning, God I love this woman.

Martin V
Queen Selen (66.217.39.69) -- Wednesday, June 23 2004, 11:43 pm

breathtaking

wow!!!! i loved this so much, great ending!!
Terrie* (66.81.137.233) -- Saturday, June 24 2006, 12:12 am

i feel the touch of Love..

in every star ,in every sunrise and sunset, in everything onr cain think of , there is you !! God knows how much i love u as well !!
 
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