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Moon Lit Grass
Author: Ben Franklin

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Jack and Amy eating on
the moon lit grass,

Jack gets up on one
knee and says '' Amy theres something
i got to ask''

before he even popped
the question,
she said ''Yes..Yes!
Jack, your my mind body and thought,''

Jack said ''no,i was gonna ask
you to stop useing your hands,
and use a bloody fork!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.96.98, 2) -- Thursday, May 20 2004, 04:55 am

refreshing

Well done hushy,
simple but effective
smile take care
Clive
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Thursday, May 20 2004, 05:45 pm

Comical

Good afternoon Hushy! You have a good sense of humor Ben! Two people, male and female having a picnic, and there's silverware in sight, but she took it upon herself to just use her hands! The male wanted to "pop the question" to her! Right there, I thought he was gonna ask to marry her, but as I kept reading, he just wanted her to use a fork instead of her hands! I know she was probably mad, that he didn't ask to marry her! Very thought provoking! Very comical and lovely Ben!

P.S. I would like to thank you for your ever so sweet comments on my poems! Now, I know that I can continue writing poetry!

Smiles,
Meri
hushy (80.6.138.109) -- Thursday, May 20 2004, 06:15 pm

tahnks

thank you for helping me with my poetry aswell,thank you for your kind comments
ben
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