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Rather Dead Than Alive
20 May, 2004
Author: Tashaxxx

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I’d rather be dead that alive
What’s the point in living?
When you know you can’t survive
And what pain does this innocent have to endure
Knowing that there’s no escape and no cure
Knowing that there’s no running away
And no waiting in hope for a bright new day
Knowing that you can’t escape that horrible beast
And he’ll dine on you and you’ll soon be his feast
Isn’t it better to be dead than alive,
In a meaning less life with no meaning to derive?
Nowhere to hide so tired of running
No one to confide so tired of trusting
So let’s be dead instead of being alive
Before it’s too late for us to realize
That we’re doomed in a future we’ve never seen
And lost in a land where we’ve never been
And yet we’ve seen it all
The misery and the pain
And we are waiting for the fall
Before the world goes insane
So when I tell you to kill me
Do not be taken by surprise
Because I want to be dead and
I hate being alive!!

------- Author's Notes -------

i admit crazy poem but a tiny winy bit interesting if you look closely,i would love recieving any comments from you good or bad,

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 12:12 am

Life

Hello Tashaxxx! Meridian here.... "Rather Dead Than Alive"------- even though we may not agree with society, as far as futuristic things go, and even though we may have been hurt by many friends, or others through betrayal and what have you, we must continue to strive and thrive and press on...... Life, like the cereal, I love it.... So many that are dead today-----even though they can't think twice now about life, because it's too late but, if they were still living, and someone had convinced and gave them an eye to eye contact on what our purpose is for life, that probably would prick their hearts, into not wanting to die.....
Good rhyme scheme, and some true words.....
But, life is everything Tashaxxx!
Smiles,
Meri
xx (198.81.26.73) -- Thursday, September 9 2004, 03:11 pm

at points i felt the same

i like it its a great poem
 
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