Author: BabyGirl


Why won't you just give up
why don't you give in,
you try to steal my heart,
but I already gave it to him.

I can't let you take
what I don't even have
I should have told you sooner
sorry to make you mad.

You can't change my mine
hopefully you can still change yours
cause I know I won't stop
I can only make things worse

I'm sorry for your feelings
but I tried to warn you.
I didn't see you falling
I'm sorry I didn't fall too.

You don't want friendship
you want my un-devided love
but I already gave it up
to someone that I love.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Sara ( -- Tuesday, June 1 2004, 07:47 pm


it was wonderful. it reminds me of somethin similar that happened to me. its hard to devote urself to the one u realy love when someone else is there to try n take it for them. nice poem
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