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I Will Remember You
6 July, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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When I hear a song-bird sing
When I see a kid on a swing
When I smell the roses bloom
When I'm shut inside my room
I will remember you

When I feel the four winds blow
When I think of Mexico
When I board a southbound train
Come sunshine or driving rain
I will remember you

When I walk down by the sea
When I'm in the redwood trees
When I gaze up at the moon
When I play your favorite tune
I will remember you

When my day is at it's end
When I'm with my closest friend
When I go to my home town
For as long as I'm around
I will remember you

I will remember you
And the crazy things
You used to do
Most of all I will recall
The love that
Came shining through
I will remember you

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Saturday, July 12 2003, 10:17 pm

For as long as I'm around I will.........Author's

This is for Nickie and Ron. In a plane together they went down. I will remember for as long as I'm around.
AJ (66.126.230.135) -- Sunday, July 13 2003, 08:27 am

Beautiful

Great poem, felt that one, im sorry i cant exactly understand your situation, but ive had my share, No worries, theyve gone to a happier place ^^. And now 2 people will remember them to, ~Aj.
... (66.222.217.200) -- Monday, November 24 2003, 08:11 am

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Good poem...
Ben (67.123.245.222) -- Monday, November 24 2003, 06:14 pm

A J and Leah, thank you for...

A J, Thank you soooo much for reading and commenting on this writing, I REALLY am pleased that you think it's beautiful. Please forgive me for taking so long. I don't know how I missed this one. I do appreciate your words VERY much! ***Ben
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Leah, thank you VERY much for your comment on I Will Remember You. I always appreciate your encouraging words. I really am glad you think this is good! ***Ben
 
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