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Why?
27 May, 2004
Author: Raul

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Baby please dont leave me,
I cant live without you,
Your my whole world,
And without you I'll just be blue,
Why are you leaving me for him?
You said you would never go back,
Remember what you said?
He did nothing but make your eyes black,
Baby I'm here to protect you,
Not to hurt you inside,
Why are you doing this to me?
You know I cant leave your side,
But no matter what,
I'll always be here for you,
I'm not like that other guy,
I'll always be true to you,
I dont know why your doing this,
Things seemed to be alright,
We were always happy,
But I guess you want the harder life,
3 years down the drain,
All for just this guy,
I cant believe its been so long,
All those years just flew by,
But just remember this,
When he hurts you again,
Don't go crying back to him,
Cuz you already know where you should of been,
And thats with me.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Thursday, May 27 2004, 04:54 pm

Awww

Tears are escaping.... I'm sniffling like crazy.... My nose is just a-running.... Someone please go and catch it.... Very heart touching words of hurt.... Love was in the air, but now it's not.... I know you longed for that happy ending, for you two to always be like peanut butter and jelly..... Never leaving one's side.... But, I'm sorry things didn't work out.... Hey Raul, or should I say, Hey Adam!
Don't worry. Be happy. Turn your frown upside down into a smile anyhow.... LOL! The day will come when you'll meet Eve....

Smiles,
Meridian
Raul (24.167.116.112) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 01:55 am

Another great response

I cant thank you enough, times are hard and you have to do what ya have to do. Sometimes its a good choice sometimes bad, but the outcome can never be predicted....thank you again!! :)
brenda (64.48.221.218) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 05:49 am

i know the feeling

I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL IT HAS HAPPEN TO ME ALSO GREAT POEM MANY PEOPLE WILL BE ABLE TO RELATE AND MANY NEW CHOICES WILL OPEN UP TO YOU TURN YOUR FROWNING FACE TO SMILEING AND BE READY FOR ANYTHING THAT COMES YOUR WAY
Raul (24.167.116.112) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 07:44 am

Brenda...

Thank you Brenda, your feedback really means a great deal to me. I'm sorry that this has happen to you in the past, nobody deserves this. Thank you again!
Sara (216.39.188.249) -- Tuesday, June 1 2004, 08:44 pm

hi

its me again! many people have gone thru this just like i have and like u said, they dun deserve it. u have a huge carein heart and i hope it all goes well in the future
 
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