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Get Out Of My Way
27 May, 2004
Author: Ben Franklin

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When i dont have one
i feel fine,
when i do,
it feels like ive committed a crime.

I know that its getting in the way
of my dreams,
those dreams i just want to reach out for,
those dreams that deserve to be
mine.

Its not the buzz
i crave for,
its the taste,

i dont wanna be one of those people that
puts their talent
to waste,

i wonder if i dont stop,
will god still open
the gate?

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Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 07:02 pm

Rhetorical question

Hey Hushy! Only you can stop the craving, by praying, and being strong, whereas, not giving into the addiction.... God never hates, he only loves..... And He'll help you in whatever seems to get in the way of your dreams.....
Emotional and lovely poem Ben!

Smiles,
Meridian
 
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