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Just You And Me
Author: Clive B Ringshall

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If I talk to you would you listen?
Yes Iím happy that's not the point,
You give to me oh so much,
If I were to ask I know that Iíd get,
You Love me true and this I also know,
Instead of roses which I love so much,
Call me from work to say those magic words,
Instead of gifts as you open the door,
Speak the words you said once often,
Instead of always making that effort to please,
Open the door so I can be a queen,
Instead of dinner out at a restaurant,
Letís get a movie and cuddle like we once did,
You see you are my love and also my life,
I know that you love me and always will,
Itís the little things we both have lost,
Those things that would always make us smile,
Those things that made us special,
Just you and me,
I love you babes and that will only grow,
So I write these words for you,
You are my angel, My lover, my friend,
You will always be special to me.

------- Author's Notes -------

In this world of love and friendships too,
We tend to forget what made us lovers and friends,
The little things in life that mean so much,
Just that look with a smile that means so much.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.150.175.113) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 03:30 pm

Clive,

excellence is written in the honesty of your words, ya know my husband and i had a very busy life, juggling family work and love..the best time my husband and i had was when we streamlined our busy lifes, when we found space for what mattered the most.FAMILY..our best occassions and life long memories were built on the simple things in life, no pressure from the office...picnics, hiking, walking at the beach, star gazing, time out for one another ..we made sure that we didn't forget about the lovers in PARENT just making the connection
Teresa (198.68.30.6) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 04:32 pm

Happiness

Clive..Happiness lies for those you cry, those who hurt, those who have searched, and those who have tried,for only they can appreciate the importance of people who have touched their lives. The brightest future will always be based on a forgotten past. My gifts are for those who inspired the passion you hear and read in my words.
All is well, you know where I work !!
Call me and we will have coffee (xt 232)
Keep your words alive by sharing them with others
Teresa
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 05:56 pm

Joyful

Creative words! Roses, cards, candy, gifts, dinner, leisure, entertainment, and etc. is all find, but when it's just the two of you together in each other's arms, enjoying each other's company without hustling and bustling, and just relaxing, means a great deal! Very well written! I enjoyed "Just You and Me"... Forget everything else!

Smiles,
Meri
Terrie* (65.142.45.233) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 10:05 pm

Clive,

oh jeez,i din't realize i had cut my comment off too soon, SORRY!! such an air head am..i must 've fallen asleep in front of the P.C.haha.anyways the rest should of read..
no matter what we do together , what stands out the most are the little things we do for one another...especially when we make the effort to break away from a busy schedule as you do to read and comment, after all what is an hour or so spent w/someone spoecial opposed to spendin' it alone? nothin' because when one loses it , you painfully regret not doin' everything your passion desired.. your writing is so out there Clive... it reminds me to stop,slow down,pour a cup of tea, savour the aroma of a friend/lover
before time takes them away..thanx for givin' us that, hugs w/a smile...Terrie*
Clive (63.184.97.222) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 10:05 pm

Terrie

All we get out of love for another is GREAT, but it is nice just to have that simple kiss that started it all, Opening of the door that lead to a smile.
Simple is Best and est is Simple
Thank YOu for your loving comment.
Clive (63.184.97.222) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 10:08 pm

Thank You Teresa

Teresa I enjoy you're written work, I like to read then be challenged to think, You do this well. A gift you have.
I will call you next week Thk for the ex #
Clive
Clive (63.184.97.222) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 10:09 pm

Meri

Just you and Me, umm you up for it Ha, Ha, Ha,
I read you're words and they always work so much I read them again.
Thk for the comment.
barb (209.112.22.173) -- Saturday, May 29 2004, 01:08 am

my comment is nothing exciting

Your writing is good clive, that's it. Ha Ha.
Terrie* (65.150.167.169) -- Saturday, May 29 2004, 01:27 pm

Clive,

absolute truth spoken in that...aww yes ...the first simple kiss..that started it all.oh yes...recall it so well...oops did it 'gain got caught in the moment....but it was too good to let it just hang there in mid air..if you get my drift...thanx for the kiss..great poem too!! Terrie*
barb (66.46.230.22) -- Sunday, May 30 2004, 01:47 pm

true

your poem is the truth. you are so lucky to find that someone special. I think you only getb one chance to find that special person, so hang on tight clive:))
 
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