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Silent
4 December, 2003
Author: Forgotton Sorrows

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Silent. You're Silent. You're Always Silent. Silent when You know something’s wrong. Silent when You're afraid. Silent when you don't understand. Silent when you hide. Silent when you have nothing to say. Silent. You're Always Silent. But I Always Hear You.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

KitKatrina (68.113.60.103) -- Saturday, December 6 2003, 10:17 am

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Wow, that was really good...I love the very last line..Great job...
Terrie* (65.148.215.70) -- Sunday, December 7 2003, 01:30 am

Forgotten Sorrows....

i love your work...such excellece in all of your writings..i truelly enjoyed this one....silence is really another way of communicating w/your heart...if you take the moment to hear deeply...have a good day..and Happy Holidays....Terrie*
Dragonsinger (216.18.141.151) -- Wednesday, December 10 2003, 01:24 am

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I see this poem from the writee's perspective: I may have a voice on the internet, but I don't talk much around people I don't trust, and that's a LOT of people. This so describes me and my good friend, who always listens to the little bit that I have to say.
 
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