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Storm
28 November, 2003
Author: Forgotton Sorrows

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The clouds roll in without giving you notice. The sky turns black ready for an attack. The rain starts to pour, as its wanting more. The lightning flashes, the thunder crashes. As you go inside, it wont be your last ride. Once again the cloud roll out, everyone comes back out to see that everything is alright, it was just a temporary fright. You’ll just have to wait and behold.. What the next storm will really hold.

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Silkened Moon (206.216.224.1) -- Saturday, November 29 2003, 05:23 pm

Awesome all the way!

I enjoyed this poem right down the the very last line Forgotten Sorrows! I love the sort of thril you put in with the lines "The lightning flashes, the thunder crashes." Absolutely in the thrill category! Great JOB!
Forgotton Sorrows (152.163.252.168) -- Saturday, November 29 2003, 05:56 pm

Thanks

Wow. Thanks a lot. It's one of the few that I've written in a long time.
 
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