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Her
25 November, 2003
Author: Forgotton Sorrows

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Why did I love you? Why did I care? You never loved me so why did I waste my time? I remember it perfectly.. it was that night.. at the club.. the lights were dimmed and we were kissing. Then you snuck off somewhere.. I looked around and saw you with her. Your arms tossed around her like you did to me. I couldn't believe my eyes, I went into the back and cried hysterically. I thought you loved me. Why did you do this to me? I thought I was the only one you loved. But I guess I was wrong. Will you kill me now?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Gem_13 (81.151.218.238) -- Saturday, July 30 2005, 11:35 pm

wow

this is the way i found out that my partner was cheating and i thought he loved me but i was wrong
anonymous (207.200.116.136) -- Sunday, July 31 2005, 07:38 am

bars?

stay out of the bars. He's a player. enjoyed your poem. thanks
barb (206.191.91.146) -- Sunday, July 31 2005, 06:38 pm

got burned

I'm sorry for your pain forgotten good write letting others know.Anonymous is right if they hit on you, they'll hit on others. Bars aren't a good place to find fidelity.
 
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