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Maze Of Darkness
Author: Scorpio

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Darkness within a world of doubt
Troubled; never at ease
Such a torment of configure
Blinded in its insecurity
Constantly watching
Searching of light
Anything to shine its glory upon
In utmost fashion the search continues
Only until rays of brightness upon it dawn
Lifted into a higher secure
Fallen in its grasping nothingness
Life in abyss of longing
Merely looking for what isn't there

------- Author's Notes -------

This poem, mainly states how when one is in the darkness and trying to see the light.

-- This was just a request done for a friend. --

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Saturday, May 29 2004, 08:59 pm

What's going on?

Hey Scorpio! That comment title, is just asking, how are things with you! Hahhaha.... So you're going through a dark tunnel, trying to feel the wall beside you as you try and make it through... Don't worry, the light will come, just keep on trucking.... It reminds me of a storm almost, when the sky clears, the clouds move apart, as the sun makes its entrance.....
EXQUISITE SCORPIO!

Smiles,
Meridian
Scorpio (67.162.95.179) -- Saturday, May 29 2004, 10:36 pm

Nothing, You? :P

Hey back! Lol, I'm doing all right. I mainly did the poem for a friend because she asked for one and described how she'd like it to be; this is how it came out. :) But in a way, I put a bit of myself in it because sometimes I relate to it as well -- Constantly within my dark place, searching for a light; anything to provide my security but it seems as though that light that could've been there has long ago withered. But sometimes, that light hasn't faded yet- And those who reach it in time feel the happiness shining its warmth upon them as if for the first time.
Thank you very much. :)

Smiles Back,
Scorpio
mental (66.153.163.163) -- Tuesday, June 1 2004, 02:57 am

sometimes

somtimes a person doesn't want the light but is secure in the dark but hopefully that person will make it out
Scorpio (67.162.95.179) -- Tuesday, June 1 2004, 01:14 pm

Indeed

A state of mind makes that person see the other end of the deal. I have felt like that before.
 
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