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Beautiful
Author: Ben Franklin

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someone told me the other day
''me and you both know that
im ugly,

When i walk down the corridor people look at me
funny,
i dont like this world,
all your intrested in is money money money!

I live in VA,
but my poetry sends me miles and miles
away,
it takes me back to my childhood,
it takes me to a different planet where i ride shooting stars,
it gives me wisdom,
its the only thing that gives me love and doesnt call
me ugly,

i wish the world was like my poetry,then no one would
judge me''.

------- Author's Notes -------

This poem is dedicated to somone on this site that i have struck up a friendship with,has helped me push on and keep going.

to that person i thank you with all my heart,
and i cant wait to turn the poetry world upside down wit ya!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Saturday, May 29 2004, 10:12 pm

Awww, Hushy

Thank you so much! I'm almost bawling up here..... You didn't have to dedicate this to me!! I love it though! I guess I have to realize I'm not, and accept who I am, inspite of the teasing.... I thank you 1,000,000,000,000 times Ben for being so supportive! We've helped each other out in friendship and poetry! I love it!
You definitely made me show all thirty-twos, I'm grateful, thankful, and I appreciate it very much!!

Smiles,
Meridian
LinzAy (152.163.252.196) -- Tuesday, June 1 2004, 01:01 am

...

Ah, that's sweet. I love how this site has brought ppl together. I'm now in VA..lonely:( lol. Nice dedication :)
 
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