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Tears Of Mine
28 February, 2004
Author: Keith

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It’s hard to believe
That at one point in time
I was happy
But now my verses no longer rhyme

My heart bleeds away
My soul cries out in depression
How did this happen
Yet I hold in this dark confession

I no longer smile
I only stare
There is no point
This pain is too much to bear

Tears of mine
Drift down in silent rain
Until I fall asleep
And dream of a time without pain

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.252.165) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 07:36 pm

I know how you feel

You sound just like me. Very emotional; I might start bawling up here. Good way of expressing your feelings Keith! And remember, just like somebody told me, the storm will soon pass afterwhile.
Tammy (66.38.4.130) -- Sunday, March 21 2004, 06:03 am

WOW

This is a wonderful poem, loved it.
stephanie (69.120.148.250) -- Thursday, October 5 2006, 01:09 am

i think

wow i really like this poem i think it was very cool.and it was intresting.my favorite part was the last because it is true the only place where you wont feel pain is in your sleep and even in there you feel pain sometimes in dreams.
 
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